This is the second self portrait assignment for my drawing class. =D My teacher loves it, haha.
Again, he likes what we've been coming up with, so now for next week I have to think of something else to do besides this now....maybe I'll do another rap with dancing footage?
Your art piece looks beautiful. So beautiful that I want it on my wall O.o.. NOW. haha.
To tell you the truth, I thought your lyrics were genuine and pretty dang good. but i think your execution needs some work. They have such potential to being strong and willful and I can tell you try to do that. but something is just off. Either you skipped a beat or maybe you need to emphasize a different part of the verse to catch the beat.
If you compare it to your other videos where the lyrics were written by someone else, you executed them wonderfully like that Free Music video. It's because someone already matched the lyrics to the beat and set up for you the tone changes etc. I think if you did it for this new one then it can improve the impact of the lyrics on your audience. ... does that make sense?
I figured since everyone else would be giving you good comments I would give you constructive comments instead... O.o.... Because I love you.
i love you both. i need both compliments and criticism so thank you xD
you're very right phanny, it's my flow. i'm still quite new to rapping, so i have yet to develop my personal flow and unique sound. gah. maybe i should do more rap covers, it might help.
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OMG I love it! The rap was...wow. I think its one of your best!
Your art piece looks beautiful. So beautiful that I want it on my wall O.o.. NOW. haha.
To tell you the truth, I thought your lyrics were genuine and pretty dang good. but i think your execution needs some work. They have such potential to being strong and willful and I can tell you try to do that. but something is just off. Either you skipped a beat or maybe you need to emphasize a different part of the verse to catch the beat.
If you compare it to your other videos where the lyrics were written by someone else, you executed them wonderfully like that Free Music video. It's because someone already matched the lyrics to the beat and set up for you the tone changes etc. I think if you did it for this new one then it can improve the impact of the lyrics on your audience. ... does that make sense?
I figured since everyone else would be giving you good comments I would give you constructive comments instead... O.o.... Because I love you.
MML you way cool. *rock on*
i love you both. i need both compliments and criticism so thank you xD
you're very right phanny, it's my flow. i'm still quite new to rapping, so i have yet to develop my personal flow and unique sound. gah. maybe i should do more rap covers, it might help.
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