LOL, and here is the non alcoholic rap, written by yours truly.
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Dude your lyrics are killer but I honestly have to say I'm still not feeling the flow. maybe you needed more practice with this track or something. There is something off, either a beat or you're too fast/slow I don't know. ..I tried it out myself.. but I was totally off. haha.. Rapping is hard. :D KEEP IT UP THOUGH! new videos are fun to watch!
2 comments:
Dude your lyrics are killer but I honestly have to say I'm still not feeling the flow. maybe you needed more practice with this track or something. There is something off, either a beat or you're too fast/slow I don't know.
..I tried it out myself.. but I was totally off. haha.. Rapping is hard. :D KEEP IT UP THOUGH!
new videos are fun to watch!
BTW you look so cute!
i don't know what i'm still missing either...i'm glad you and kanna pointed out the flow thing haha.
but still, i do think i am getting better each time i write something new. maybe i'll get a breakthrough soon if i keep going at it.
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